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More Spot the Difference

Post 14 / Posted April 30th 2020

More Spot the Difference: The Moogy Roo Series.


This Blog is a retrospective look back on my self publishing journey which took just on 12 months from the day I decided to publish my first story, mid January 2019 to finally collecting my first 534 copies from customs at Brisbane Wharf late January 2020.


Date in History 27th May 2019

I continue to receive more final draft sketches from Jan who is doing an amazing job.



Draft Illustration (Below Left) Final Illustration (Below Right)

Spot the differences above? Addition of period at the end of test ... and slight change to layout of second speech bubble "Are you ready"

Draft Illustration (Below Left) Final Illustration (Below Right)

Spot the differences above? Significant illustration change to show movement of my girl character Moogy Roo and the fact that she is present instructing Jack to follow her instructions. Also addition to periods ... at the end of each sentence.



Draft Illustration (Below Left) Final Illustration (Below Right)

Spot the difference above? Correction of of the word 'prying" in the second speech bubble as it should have been 'spying' . Also the addition of the periods ... again! Another element hard to detect is Jack has been subtly resized in the final draft above as well as other to help show that he is younger than Moggy Roo.



Coming up: More changes to draft sketches.


Thanks for your support.


Please check out a portfolio of Jan Pimping's amazing artwork at www.behance.net/mrjan

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